There you are
always
anticipating my needs
welcoming
my embrace
my tears
my dreams
devoted
eternally
never
wavering
Each night
you are there
plump yet perfect
inviting me
to join you
Every evening
I accept
and
appreciate
you
my precious
pillow
There you are
always
anticipating my needs
welcoming
my embrace
my tears
my dreams
devoted
eternally
never
wavering
Each night
you are there
plump yet perfect
inviting me
to join you
Every evening
I accept
and
appreciate
you
my precious
pillow
Love your surprise, yet not, ending. Totally get it!
Talk about surprise endings, beautifully done!!! First thought was a person, then a cat, then I got it! So great! And such a great strategy to use the surprise at the end! Thank you for sharing!!!
Thought you were talking about Jeezy…til the plump line…haha!
Ummm you should know that I would never write a romantic post.
I know but everlasting love…made me think of Jeezy!!
Very clever! I love the surprise ending. You had me wondering throughout your piece of who you were talking about.
Thanks MaryHelen!
One of my favorite things!! Great poem that is so true yet simple 🙂
Thanks Bsoltero, nothing better than a pillow, right?
I so love my precious pillow too! I wrote an ode to my cup of coffee this week, and then ended it with my perfect pillow…plump, yes!! Love your post!
Thanks! I will head over to your blog and read it Gael!
I was expecting a different ending! You got me! Lovely poem.
Thanks bevbaird!